Okay, now I am doing some serious editing on Chapter One again, I thought I was finish with it. But it seems I was wrong. In the last paragraph at the end of chapter one I wanted to make this character mysterious and questions to who he maybe. which will be a surprise. I want the reader to wonder, Is this mysterious character a hero or is he trouble?
He sat near his fireplace, in his dark study, drinking scotch, when the flame sparked up. Making his golden eyes stare into the flame. Of a distance time and place. A chill passed over him. He realize the time had come once more to break the curse.
Okay, I wanted it to be intriguing with an unusual location. I think I am finish with the editing on Chapter one. Now I need to put it in a file I will not delete.
- When to Stop Editing (kristenpham.com)
- How to Use Scrivener to Edit Your Book (whilethekidsaresleeping.wordpress.com)