My Chapter and Ideas: Editing

Okay, now I am doing some serious editing on Chapter One again,  I thought I was finish with it. But it seems I was wrong.  In the last paragraph at the end of chapter one I wanted to make this  character mysterious  and questions to who he maybe. which will be a surprise. I want the reader to wonder,  Is this mysterious character a hero or is he trouble?   

Moon Isle, 

He sat near his fireplace, in his dark study, drinking scotch, when the flame sparked up. Making his golden eyes stare into the flame. Of a distance time and place. A chill passed over him.  He realize the time had come once more to break the curse.

Okay,  I wanted it to be intriguing with an unusual location. I think I am finish with the editing on Chapter one. Now I need to put it in a file I will not delete.

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