Okay, I have to admit as sudden as my poetry writing mood appeared, it suddenly faded away. Until next time…
~~Her Fears Into The Unknown~~
She enters the dark forest with fear
Each steps she takes, she hears
Screams and echoes, “Don’t go!”
“You should not be here.”
But she keeps going farther
Into the dark forest
A mist forms around her
She hears a very low sound
She steps into the center of the forest
Everything is quiet now
Has she found what she’s
Been searching for at last?
She reaches a crystal case
There, a young maiden sleeps
She hears a weep as the crystal case
Melts from the touch of her fingertips
Now, she sees the fair maiden’s face
And recognize herself.
Her eyes open, the dark forest
Turns into a golden forest.
She has overcome her deepest fears
Into the unknown…
©V. ROSE DEMET ™2016
Have a great weekend. 🙂
You just know when it is right. Some take longer than others but given time the final version comes to stay. Keep them coming.
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A fairy tale with a trick ending. I like!
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Thank you. 🙂
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Hello Firefly/ V.Rose! Since I find your blog quite inspiring, I nominated you for the One Lovely Blog Award. You can read all about it in my latest blog post: https://survivednarc.wordpress.com/2016/02/16/another-one-lovely-blog-award-nomination/
I hope you have the time and oportunity to participate (It’s basically just writing a blog post and mentioning some nominees of your own choosing).
Take care. 🙂 /SurvivedNarc
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Thank you. Have a great week. 🙂
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You’re welcome. 😊 Same to you!
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Final?
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Oh no, not final. I will write more poems in the near future. Have a nice week. 🙂
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Very relieved!
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So beautiful and magical… Thank you. Love and best wihes, dear Verna. Aquileana ❤
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You’re welcome. Best wishes to you also. Have a wonderful week. 🙂
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very good indeed
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Thank you. Have a wonderful week. 🙂
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